Trembling feet and bare thighs,
Rummaged in the dead of streets;
Until hearing a hustle in the dark,
Someone lurked in shadows; illicit.
Teen beauty and body; a culprit,
In luring the forbidden foes,
Nostrils dilate of the fornicators,
Growling at the aroma of rose.
Ominous strenching smell, quakes her apart;
Dumbfounded the girl runs for evasion; calling His help,
A thunder strikes through the sky, thankfully,
Leaving the ruffians to yelp.
Way ahead she heaves a sigh of relief,
'Ah! I am saved in His Grace.'
Yonder in the meadows; conscious and catching breath,
Shivering they yell - "In the sky, I saw His face".
I, Prathamesh Deshmukh, am a 17 year old teenager aspiring for
IIT-JEE, the hardest exam in India. However, I am a part-time bloggerand a creative writer. My passion is writing; writing deeply by heart.
According to me, a poem is a song that lies in our heart. In our
hearts, there's a poem. On our lips, there's a song.
The poem I wrote above is an acrostics, a traditional type of poetry.
The first letter of each word of each line, when viewed vertically
reveals a deeper meaning, which has a great significance in today's
world. Trust in God Always.
At my blog,
'BEST LOVE POEMS'
*** P.S: I personally don't know Prathamesh, but few days back he asked me if I could post his poetry here. I am glad I did, but I will admit I am not someone who can write poetry, can only appreciate it !
Thanks Ananya, for giving me a chance to write on your blog.
ReplyDeleteAnd yes, I believe you will write a poem one day; a poem that they call a 'masterpiece' :)
Prathamesh nicely written, great play of words, and a dollop of maturity with a tinge of hope and optimism, though a writer of dark poems, I loved your optimistic spirit, keep up the good work.
DeleteThanks a lot for the poetry , Prathamesh. Your words as so true, the TRUST IN GOD ALWAYS thing :) Thanks, Ananya for featuring him here.
ReplyDeleteAnanya Thanks for the post
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem. Thanks for sharing, Ananya.
ReplyDeleteGood one..
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem.
ReplyDeleteThe boy writes well.
Thank you everyone! :-)
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