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Happy Mother's Day !

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"I am ready, let's go!" 

"I want to go alone, please mom" 

"But it's Mother's Day" 

"I know, but if you come, from tomorrow everyone at school will start teasing me... " 
"Because you are too fat, to fit in a single chair" 
"You don't want to embarrass me, do you"
"Happy Mother's Day, bye mom"





This is my first attempt in writing 55 on Friday.
A story expressed in EXACT 55 words, nothing less nothing more!

It's short, takes just few seconds to read, but I cannot say easy to write as well, not yet :)


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26 comments:

  1. AnonymousMarch 6, 2014 at 11:57 AM

    Aww.. we should never be embarrassed of our parents whatever be the case!

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  2. Jyotsna BhatiaMarch 6, 2014 at 12:22 PM

    When would children learn to not hurt their mothers? Sigh !!

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  3. KParthasarathiMarch 6, 2014 at 5:28 PM

    I liked this.This is after all a 55 word fiction

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  4. Shilpa GargMarch 6, 2014 at 6:32 PM

    Oh! That must have hurt! Children often hurt and are oblivious to parents' feelings and sentiments! [-(

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  5. RajlakshmiMarch 6, 2014 at 6:54 PM

    That's hurtful. I feel for the Mom. Well written

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  6. Ankur AnandMarch 6, 2014 at 7:57 PM

    i guess that was just from a teenager child view .. well written .

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  7. AnanyaMarch 6, 2014 at 8:28 PM

    Hey guys, Thanks for dropping ur comment ;(

    Sadly it's not FICTION ! It's the harsh reality.

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  8. AarthyMarch 6, 2014 at 9:50 PM

    What an irony! Happy mother's day indeed :(

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  9. UnknownMarch 6, 2014 at 9:54 PM

    Very nice attempt.

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  10. sugandhaMarch 6, 2014 at 11:02 PM

    Lesson to take home...whatever we become, it is because they make us...our parents should never be an embarrassment to us.

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  11. kalpana solsiMarch 6, 2014 at 11:34 PM

    Congrats Ananya on your maiden attempt of F-55. a very nice one. this is harsh reality .

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  12. Michelle LiewMarch 7, 2014 at 2:32 AM

    Well, it's the preteen mindset, for sure!

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  13. AnonymousMarch 7, 2014 at 10:08 AM

    what? i expected something more from u. Is not worthy of a post on your blog! come on, you can do better...

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    1. AnanyaMarch 7, 2014 at 7:48 PM

      hmm.. Thanks!
      Will try and improve on my next post...

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  14. AnonymousMarch 8, 2014 at 3:12 AM

    Sensitive post. I have a request: Ignore negative comments and people putting unhealthy comments should try to write a beautiful 55-er like you did. Keep the faith, Ananya:)

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  15. Shailaja VMarch 9, 2014 at 10:34 PM

    Sad to know that this was reality and not fiction. But yes, kids need to be sensitised gradually. Good idea for a 55-er, Ananya.

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  16. SatyavirMarch 10, 2014 at 3:53 AM

    I wish such kids get the same sort of treatment when they are parents ....just to give them the taste of their own medicine and to let them know what it takes to be a Parent !
    Unveiling true colors of human insensitivity ....stingy yet true ! :\

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